차이점을 바탕으로 비교하는 영작 에세이입니다. 문단 나눔이 간결하고 주제 문장 역시 명확합니다.
First of all, the Eastern Sea and the Western Sea have completely different views. There are mud flats in the Western Sea. It is the biggest difference which we can observe. Also, because of these mud flats and the location, the Western Sea is located in between South Korea and China, however, the Eastern Sea is much deeper than the Western Sea. The Deep water depth allows vessels to anchor or leave, so it is easy to find huge trade ports or dockyards in the Eastern Sea.
On the other hand, the Western Sea has a lot of small islands compared to the Eastern Sea. According to The Academy of Korean Studies,