외국에 교환 학생을 가서 에세이 시간에 A+를 맞은 에세이입니다.
글에서 진한 글씨로 표시되어 있는 부분은 첨삭을 받은 부분입니다. 트렌스젠더에 관한 영문에세이를 찾는 분이라면 아주 유용할 것입니다.
Ⅱ. Proceed to the main issue
Ha ri-su is an entertainer in Korea. She has worked in various fields of activity such as model and singer. Although she has a fame, actually she is a transsexual. Have you ever heard about the transsexual? Transsexual is people who change their gender. Ha ri-su is one of them. At frist time, she and her family suffered from many things, but she overcome her circumstances. Besides, she is successful as an entertainer,