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1. 미국 현지 교수의 교정본 - What type of learner I am
2. Essay - What type of learner I am
This is a nice revision. The specific details that you added helped to develop your paragraph. Overall, you have good control of your grammar. The most common error is the placement of your adverbs—they typically go after the auxiliary (“helping”) verb.
What type of learner I am.
I think my learning type is visual. I forget easily those words and numbers which I heard but I tend to remember printed characters longer. When I hear someone’s name at first, especially unaccustomed English names, it is difficult to remember those names. However, if they give their business cards or they write down their names, the words are remaining in my memory longer.