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Do you know how many people want to own their small business after later in life? This chart of survey data tells the story:
Of those surveyed, 56% said they wanted to have their own business later in life. That’s more than four times as many who simply want to retire and not work at all! Although lots of people want to own their business, but there are few people to succeed. Actually it is not easy to start your own business. When you open up your business in another field, you should have expert`s advice with good business plan. So the perfect business plan is already set up for you. Open up your Gas station with S-Oil in Ahn-Seong. I guarantee your success in this business, because I have analyzed this plan in many ways such as earning rate, location, brand, employee management, and atmosphere and I checked the safety also.
First of all, when you open up your gas station, you might worry about the earning rate, but you don’t have to worry about it. Cause the demand of oil continues in good request.