미국 영문 자기소개서 입니다.
지원학교는 Stanford, MIT, Cal Tech, GA tech 입니다.
콜롬비아 대학원 다니는 누나의 감수를 얻었습니다.
혹, 문법상으로 틀린부분이 있다면 지적부탁 드립니다.
Experiencing a failure
The modern military relies heavily on highly specialized equipment in order to accomplish tasks quickly and efficiently. Actually, Transportation of troops and supplies into remote and desolate regions is extremely difficult. So, Armies are forced to march into such areas, risking hazardous terrains as well as ambushes from opposing forces.
This story is about my military service at ROK MND (Republic Of Korea, Ministry Of National Defense). (To get the background knowledge I will explain some), The base camp was located close to the DMZ(Demilitarized Zone: sensitive areas) toward North Korea. And, Our purpose is only for the security defense against sudden attack and by tapping information from the North Korea.
- My squad and team leaders kept their men in line, distributing the heavy equipment among themselves.
- Ours was the only one of two that finished without a soldier falling out.
- As for the radio, between myself, the radioman, Sergeant Kim, and sergeant Han, we all shared the burden.