제목 : People behave differently when they wear different clothes.
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According to research, People behave differently when they wear different clothes. I agree with this point. We are influenced by our clothes. We behave differently in different kinds of clothes and we also behave differently towards others based on their clothes.
First, our behavior depends on what we are wearing. For example, there are two groups for this research. One of groups consists of people who are wearing uniforms. The other consists of people who are wearing casual clothes. People who are wearing uniforms tend to act more carefully rather than the other people. Even, when they are eating and talking.
Secondly, we behave differently towards others based on their clothes. Clothes usually become criteria as we judge people. For example, people who wear expensive clothes are likely to receive better treatment at a restaurant than people who wear cheap clothes.