이 영어에세이는 미국 유펜(University of Pennsylvania) Writing 수업의 과제였던 글입니다.
첨삭까지 완전히 끝낸 글입니다. 이 글은 주제인 `인생에서의 기억남는 여행`을 의 형식 중심으로 기술하였습니다.
I always love traveling. This is true for others also, but especially my family loves traveling so much. My family always plans trips each year, so when I was young, I had three trips per year. Traveling has affected me very much, not only feeling love for my family but also improving my way of thinking or my attitude.
It was traveling to London that I could feel my family in love. My family planned a trip to London without a guide. At that time, I was a little concerned about communication with foreigners because I was a middle school student, so I was not good at speaking English very well. Neither were my parents. However, my father was good at managing and carrying out plans, and despite my fears about English, my family could communicate with foreigners. Then, I could relieve