영작문시간에 했던 과제입니다. 한달에 걸쳐서 계속 원어민 교수님의 교정을 받고 만든 FINAL DRAFT이므로 문법, 논리 전개가 거의 100% 정확할 것이며, 10점만점에 10점 맞은 영작문 입니다. 그냥 바로 내도 상관없을 정도로 완성도 높은 영작문입니다. 2002 한일 월드컵에서 한국이 4강에 오른 이유를 세가지로 들어 논리적으로 글을 전개하였습니다. 유영하게 사용하시길 바랍니다^^
The Korean soccer team was able to show their great ability resulting from the advantage of home ground. Whether players ran in their home ground or away ground is the quite important factor of the game. The Korean soccer team was accustomed to the climate of Korea. Also players were familiar with the grass on the stadium of Korea. Furthermore, the great support of the people for the Korean soccer team was the one of the most important advantages for the Korean soccer team. The passionate support helped Korean players to feel assured and raise the fighting spirit. On the other hand, their support made each opponent teams’ players nervous. In particular, the Red Devils, the Korean soccer team’s supporter, was the twelfth player of the Korean soccer team. Sixty thousand Red Devils not only in the stadium, but also outside all the streets in Korea were the primary power of the success of the Korean soccer team. Pietro Geddin, the coach of the Italian soccer team in the 2002 World Cup, said the main reason that they lost the match against the Korean soccer team in the 2002 World Cup was the support of Red Devils. He said that Italian players were stressed out during the game because of the amazing support of Red Devils that were filled with the stadium. All in all, the advantage of home ground caused the great success of the Korean soccer team in the 2002 World Cup.