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A+ 받은 에세이이기도 합니다.
물론, 외국인 교수의 참조를 받은 것입니다.
Introduction, Body, Conclusion으로 이뤄져 있고
다시 이에 대한 BP, SS, SD를 나눠 쓰여져 있습니다
Did your childhood was happy? Many adults, I`ve been met, think that childhood is the happiest time of one`s life. Can you remember that time? Most people likes to remember the time as no worries. Although many people think so, the studies give many negative effects to students. Because of competitions, money and homeworks, school students feel strong pressure.
First, school students feel pressure because they realize the competitions. Competitions make students fight for No.1. My cousin who was in a liberal arts high school even removed his school, just because a liberal arts school students must try to get good scores for entrance of well-known universities. Also, there are many ghost stories in Korea that tell jealousies to smarter one and it even goes to kill the smarter. Because of competitions, students don`t want to share their knowledges. In my experience, outstanding students try to hide their knowledge because they think, the other students are competitors. So 55.6% of students have been tried cheating on exams - Pollever polling organization surveyed - to get a good grade. The problems of competition even worse when the smarter students couldn`t get along with their friends. One of my friends who was an honor student talked me that he dreams every night chased by the other students.