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The bad effects of computer games
One day, when I went to PC-bang to meet my friends, I saw many people, even girls and adults, who played computer games. I was surprised at that time because it was 2 am. I also heard news that a girl killed someone with a knife in Japan because she wanted to test a game`s story. On the other hand, we can see frequently on the news that some people who play computer games for 38 hours straight die. As computer technology is developing, many people play computer games. However, computer games have bad effects on our minds, schedules, and health.
The worst effect that computer games have is on our mind. People who play computer games can`t distinguish what is real and what is not. The most recent computer games have visual effects that look like reality. For example, blood, bodies, weapons, monsters, everything. In addition, game`s stories progress in the virtual reality, so they can do whatever they want. On top of that, computer games have a lot of violences. For example, there are shooting, fighting, war, and terror games. People are developing inclinations toward violence, because they can play games indiscreetly without any restraining Moreover, people who play computer games may begin losing their senses. Most people play game for fun, so they may think of death for fun. Computer games also remove people`s feeling. In this way, computer games have bad effects on our minds.