어학연수기관에서 쓴것인데 교수님이 3번이상 봐주신 에세이고
detail이 탄탄하게 잘되어 있어서 A+받은 거랍니다.
introduction 1이랑 body 3개랑 conclusion 1개로 구성되어 있습니다.
전형적인 미국에세이의 구조를 따랐구요.(글씨체나 글씨크기 조차...^^)
그래서 교수님들이 구조가 아주 탄탄하다고 좋아하실 거예요.
이거 내시면 점수 A+++++받으실 껍니당^-^
About my future…
This question is asked to me a lot of these days. I also throw this kind of question when I meet the friends by chance who I haven’t seen for ages. Question could be “what are you doing now ““what are you preparing your future?” But they seem to avoid answering for that. Because I guess that will be one of the sensitive questions if they haven’t any job yet.
About my future? It isn’t easy for me to answer exactly. It could be similar to the other people. Because this one year in University could be most vital in deciding my future.
But obviously, as getting closer to my graduation, my plan are getting clear.
And meanwhile, I will marry the girl who only loves me. And make a family. I will have a son and a daughter each. And we will live with my parents, my brother’s family and sister’s family together in a big house that I design. It will be large family, but I don’t worry. There will be only lots of fun. Isn’t it the great idea?
In a word I actually don’t care very much how much money I make, and how great I success in society. But happiness with my family is important enough to be my whole dream. Money can buy happiness. I will love my job that I chose.