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To change the university entrance exam focused education, it seems a good idea to judge students for lifelong education. This will show the possibility of new education which will satisfy personal, social, and educational desires. Most Korean students study extremely hard in high school to enter to the university, and then they tend to study much less in university. By the time they graduate from the university, they again start studying for the employment examination. But this is efficient nor up to world economic standards. Education is not only for the barriers of all the entrance exams but for all parts of our lives. The Korean public education system has to see what is really important in the nation`s and the students` lives, and what kind of positive differences can be made in the public education system.