교환학생을 준비할당시에 쓴글이며 외국인교수가 검사해준 글입니다
잘썼다는 평을 많이 받았고 호주에 교환학생으로 가게되었습니다.
3가지 커다란 단락과 서론 결론 을 포함하고있음
The scheme of the studies
I am pleased to have this opportunity to draw up a statement of purpose for my studies and how I am going to study. There are diverse reasons why I want to go to Australia and be an exchange student representing Kyunghee University, and I am going to explain them from now on.
First of all, studying abroad will help me experience other cultures. Approximately for one year I stayed in New Zealand to learn English and every single thing I experienced there was all attractive and fascinating enough to captivate my attention. I liked New Zealanders, their different life style, and even their teaching style. And that experience made me accept varied cultures and thoughts without cultural shock even though theirs were quite different from mine.