영문과 4학년 학생이 작문한 것입니다. 작문후에 원어민의 첨삭지도를 받았기 때문에 모두 정확한 미국식 표현입니다.
Culture shock is the term used to describe the experience many people have when they travel to another country. It's just a complex phenomenon.
Group pressure is another culture shock and it inspires someone to feel strangeness, to learn superiority and to try hard. Moreover, culture shock is very interesting first time. That shock is also to inspire person's learning lust. First, they might feel shocking and cannot use your own culture as a map to guide your own behaviour. Next, They're totally out of control and behave irrationally.