도시화의 이유, 대도시의 사는 이점,,,등 알찬 내용으로 구성되어있음 ^^
원어민 교수님이 교정해주셔서 틀린 부분은 거의 없을꺼구요...좋은 점수 받았던 레폿입니다 ^^
population tends to concentrate in a large cities. People who concentrate in a big city has reasonable reasons.
Ⅱ. Main subject
1. People pay attention to environmental problem.
2. According to people crowd into a city, large city has many problems. There is an need of both individual's efforts and nation's policies.
3. Living in a big city has the advantages : benefit of medical treatment, various opportunities to get a job, high quality of education, convenience of means of transportation, many cultural and convenience facilities
Advantage of living in a big city is summarized. Both an individual and a nation make an effort to solve a big city's problems.
People who dwell in a big city live serviceable and abundant better than people who dwell in a country. Before everything, there are various kinds of occupations in a large city. There are various kinds of professional institutions in a big city. In result, many people have chances to receive good education. Many people make use of comfortable transportation in a big city. Cultural facilities including a theater, a museum and an exhibit hall gather in a big city. Also, all sorts of convenient facilities including a department store, a park and gymnasium exist. Increase of population causes many problems. It is necessary that both an individual and a nation make an effort to solve city's problems. Such efforts make a good city to live. People want to live in a big city because of advantages and convenience.