영어 회화 시간에 쓴 영어 에세이로 대통령이 되면 하고 싶은 정책(하고 싶은 일)에 대해 쓴 글입니다. 4가지정도 썼고요. 750 words 정도되고요. 다쓴 후 외국인한테 조언을 받아서 문법적으로는 크게 틀리지 않을 거에요.
Thirdly, education is at the core of Korea's basic promise that all Koreans should be able to make the most of their potential. We can say that education determines a nation's future. If the people is uneducated, the Nation will quickly falter. Therefore teachers should try to let students maximize their potentials and realize their goals. In this case, the very high qualities of teachers are required. To raise the quality of a teacher, the country have to support the University of Education. For instance, the country can let students in University of Education study for free, and can support their cost of living. Besides educational facilities are poorly equipped in some schools. The country should provide one PC per a student so that the teachers can conduct a lesson based on computer. By using computer, the students can search information related to the lesson, and communicate with their teacher. Also the country can provide the air-conditioner in each classroom. The cool and fresh environment will increase student's motivation.