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What a wonderful wedding it is! Many people choose to stay single because of increasing women workers. The rise of women's financial power is changing thoughts of women about oncept of marriage today. More and more women find that they do not need to get married but they feel more confident and comfortable living alone. Nowadays 'spinsterhood' became a common word in our community. It means that many people choose not to get married but to remain single. It is true that living as single became some sorts of trend throughout the world nowadays. In this essay, I will show that it is not a good idea to live alone because it is more dangerous than living together, it is addicted something easily, and it makes you lonely.