교정까지 받은 에세이 입니다.
참고로 A플러스 받은 에세이 이구요.
많은 도움이 되셨으면 하네요.
A4 5장 분량입니다. 논리구조가 좋다는 평을 받았습니다.
The Internet is one of the great invention. From children to adults, many people use the internet nowadays and it become a part of human life. The Internet is an enormous resource to everyone today. People can use the Internet easily anytime and every where in their life. People can get a lot of benefits by using the Internet such as getting an information, saving time and others. Although the Internet has made life more convenient by giving valuable information, it has also created serious problems. This is because of confusing, addicting, invalid and unsuitable information and cybercrimes, so people should be careful and selective when they use the Internet.
Jung, Seong Ho. “ A middle school student kill his younger brother” Dong-A News
Letter on the Web 15, May, 2000.
Storm A. King. “Is the Internet Addictive, or Are Addicts Using the Internet?”
Goldberg, I. (1996). Internet Addiction. Electronic message posted to