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It's a great pleasure to have an opportunity to introduce myself to you. My name is Jung-eun kim. I was born in Pusan Ganman-dong on July, 9 in 1981. But I had lived in Kwang-yang till. I entered Jin-woul Elementary School when I was eight year old. And I changed to another school-Kwang-young Elementary School. graduated from elementary school in 1994. hen I entered Kwang-Young Middle School. This school is in Kwang-yang. This middle school is very smaller than other middle school. A school year has six classes. entered Kwang-Yang Jae chol High School after graduated from middle in 1997.